Heart – Break !

Posted: March 14, 2009 in Uncategorized

There are some of my friends who have experienced a HEART-BREAK.. and still they would be doing everything they could do on earth  to stop that from happenning.. ! Ofcourse. DEVDAS chapter would surely follow it , if they cant manage it well ! LOL !

This is dedicated to all those people who were/are in this situation ! Try to understand it!

ಹೃದಯವ ತೊರೆಯಲಾಗದು ನಿನಗೆಂದೂ
ಚುಚ್ಚಿಟ್ಟರು, ಇಲ್ಲ ಕಿಚ್ಚು ಹಚ್ಚಿಟ್ಟರು…!!!

ನಿನಗಿದೆ ನನ್ನ ಒಲುಮೆಯ ಬಂಧನ
ನಿನ್ನಲ್ಲಿ ಕಂಡಿರುವೆ ಒಪ್ಪಿಗೆಯ ಸ್ಪಂಧನ
ಬಸಿದಿರುವೆ ನನ್ನ ಶಾಂತಿಯ ಸಿಂಚನ
ನಿನಗೆಂದೇ ಇಟ್ಟಿರುವೆ ನನ್ನೆಲ್ಲಾ ಕಾಂಚನ

ಚುಚ್ಚುತಿದೆ ಬಾಣಗಳು ನಿನ್ನ ಹೊರಸೆಳೆಯಲು
ಕಾರಣವು ನೀನೆಂದು ಇಬ್ಬರಿಗೂ ತಿಳಿದಿರಲು
ಕಣ್ಣ್ಕರಗಿ ಕಣ್ಣೀರೆ ಕೊನೆವರೆಗೂ ಕ್ರಮಿಸಲು
ಒಪ್ಪುವೆನು ಸಹಿಸುವೇನು ಎಲ್ಲವನು, ನಿನ್ನುಳಿಸಲು

ಈ ಹೃದಯವ ತೊರೆಯಲಾಗದು ನಿನಗೆಂದೂ
ಚುಚ್ಚಿಟ್ಟರು, ಇಲ್ಲ ಕಿಚ್ಚು ಹಚ್ಚಿಟ್ಟರು…… !!

For those who experience font issues :

Heart Break

Heart Break

Please put your comments friends!! 🙂 Dont break my heart 😉 !

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Comments
  1. Vijay says:

    Instant Poem 😉

    nice one again…

    Chuchhittataru illi Kicchittataru 😉

  2. Vijay says:

    its Chucchittaru illi Kicchittaru 😛

  3. shilpa says:

    😀 Great one !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Thankfully, I was never in this situation 😀 Ofcourse, I will never be 😀

  4. snabhi says:

    Good Good ! 🙂 thanks

  5. Vinay Shetty says:

    Fire in da heart poem maga…. super dard bari poem….

  6. Pallavi Somaiah says:

    Good one kano….but for whom is this??

  7. Badreesh says:

    kavi ratna kalidasa nannu meeristya kano

  8. snabhi says:

    @ Pallavi.. not for you and me 😉 !! hahahaha
    @ badreesh.. thanks maga

  9. Shrikrishna says:

    nice one abhi… specially these words “ಚುಚ್ಚಿಟ್ಟರು, ಇಲ್ಲ ಕಿಚ್ಚು ಹಚ್ಚಿಟ್ಟರು”
    🙂

  10. snabhi says:

    thanks dude krishna

  11. Nachiket Karajagi says:

    Hey Abhi,

    Kavite chennagide..just a suggestion..don’t try hard to have similar sounding words at the end of sentences..it may help you write richer poems..sometimes this may restrict your true ability.just a suggestion though..

  12. prashanth says:

    hai abi… nice poem brother… full of feelings….
    thumba ishta aythu….. 🙂
    yaake asthondhu feelingu anthanu gothaythu….

  13. snabhi says:

    ya.. nachi.. i have tried such poems too 🙂 i wanted rhyming here as it has to be taken for song 🙂 !
    @prashanth… thanks ! 🙂

  14. Raju says:

    sakkat!!! one more para iddidre innu super aagirodu, or may be you left me wanting for more 😉

  15. when i read Vayaskara Padya, it thought it was just by chance, now with heart break. u have won a few hearts with ur writing skills. hope u go long way pening more such beauties..

  16. Varun says:

    Ninna ee kavithe namma manasannu ‘Chuchide’ Abhi…!!! Aadro chennagide…!!! 🙂 🙂

  17. champu says:

    Superbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb anna 🙂

  18. snabhi says:

    thanks all !! 🙂 Sunny, please read my other poems too 😉

  19. Sowmya Shree says:

    Nice one Abhi .. !! 🙂

  20. srinidhi.ps says:

    ಮುಟ್ಟಿತು ಮನವ ಮುಟ್ಟಿತು….|
    ಕೆರಳಿಸಿತು ಭವನೆಗಳ ಕೆರಳಿಸಿತು…|| 😛

  21. snabhi says:

    thanks soumya and srinidhi

  22. Anu says:

    Good one!!!!

  23. Ajay says:

    Good poem,, maga

    suits my current situation………. 😦 😦 😦

  24. snabhi says:

    thanks
    thats ok.. man.. dont worry

  25. AddhiLokkesh says:

    ya very true abhi you have said it nice

  26. GS says:

    2nd stanza is nice kaNo.

    ಚುಚ್ಚುತಿದೆ ಬಾಣಗಳು ನಿನ್ನ ಹೊರಸೆಳೆಯಲು
    ಕಾರಣವು ನೀನೆಂದು ಇಬ್ಬರಿಗೂ ತಿಳಿದಿರಲು
    ಕಣ್ಣ್ಕರಗಿ ಕಣ್ಣೀರೆ ಕೊನೆವರೆಗೂ ಕ್ರಮಿಸಲು
    ಒಪ್ಪುವೆನು ಸಹಿಸುವೇನು ಎಲ್ಲವನು, ನಿನ್ನುಳಿಸಲು…

    Nice one… continue…

  27. Mahesh says:

    Kankaragi kanneere Konevaregu Kramisalu—–
    Ista aithu…something new……Good one……….as usual..
    even first two lines are ……touchy lines

  28. vidyaravi says:

    asusal super one…. once again…

  29. Avinav says:

    beautiful one! …great poem once again

  30. giri says:

    Where did you search these words…..:-)
    eno feeling nice read , but tough to be in that position

    neevu yavagalu bari tha erbeku 🙂

  31. Harish says:

    🙂

  32. kannu ninna nodalu kaayuthalihudu, manasu rekke bicchi haaruthalihudu. Nee thorida aa preethi indu mullagi ee baala daarige nova needuthalihudu

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