There are some of my friends who have experienced a HEART-BREAK.. and still they would be doing everything they could do on earth to stop that from happenning.. ! Ofcourse. DEVDAS chapter would surely follow it , if they cant manage it well ! LOL !
This is dedicated to all those people who were/are in this situation ! Try to understand it!
ಹೃದಯವ ತೊರೆಯಲಾಗದು ನಿನಗೆಂದೂ
ಚುಚ್ಚಿಟ್ಟರು, ಇಲ್ಲ ಕಿಚ್ಚು ಹಚ್ಚಿಟ್ಟರು…!!!
ನಿನಗಿದೆ ನನ್ನ ಒಲುಮೆಯ ಬಂಧನ
ನಿನ್ನಲ್ಲಿ ಕಂಡಿರುವೆ ಒಪ್ಪಿಗೆಯ ಸ್ಪಂಧನ
ಬಸಿದಿರುವೆ ನನ್ನ ಶಾಂತಿಯ ಸಿಂಚನ
ನಿನಗೆಂದೇ ಇಟ್ಟಿರುವೆ ನನ್ನೆಲ್ಲಾ ಕಾಂಚನ
ಚುಚ್ಚುತಿದೆ ಬಾಣಗಳು ನಿನ್ನ ಹೊರಸೆಳೆಯಲು
ಕಾರಣವು ನೀನೆಂದು ಇಬ್ಬರಿಗೂ ತಿಳಿದಿರಲು
ಕಣ್ಣ್ಕರಗಿ ಕಣ್ಣೀರೆ ಕೊನೆವರೆಗೂ ಕ್ರಮಿಸಲು
ಒಪ್ಪುವೆನು ಸಹಿಸುವೇನು ಎಲ್ಲವನು, ನಿನ್ನುಳಿಸಲು
ಈ ಹೃದಯವ ತೊರೆಯಲಾಗದು ನಿನಗೆಂದೂ
ಚುಚ್ಚಿಟ್ಟರು, ಇಲ್ಲ ಕಿಚ್ಚು ಹಚ್ಚಿಟ್ಟರು…… !!
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Dont break my heart
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Instant Poem
nice one again…
Chuchhittataru illi Kicchittataru
its Chucchittaru illi Kicchittaru
Thankfully, I was never in this situation
Ofcourse, I will never be
Good Good !
thanks
Fire in da heart poem maga…. super dard bari poem….
Good one kano….but for whom is this??
thanks vinay !
kavi ratna kalidasa nannu meeristya kano
@ Pallavi.. not for you and me
!! hahahaha
@ badreesh.. thanks maga
nice one abhi… specially these words “ಚುಚ್ಚಿಟ್ಟರು, ಇಲ್ಲ ಕಿಚ್ಚು ಹಚ್ಚಿಟ್ಟರು”
thanks dude krishna
Hey Abhi,
Kavite chennagide..just a suggestion..don’t try hard to have similar sounding words at the end of sentences..it may help you write richer poems..sometimes this may restrict your true ability.just a suggestion though..
hai abi… nice poem brother… full of feelings….
thumba ishta aythu…..
yaake asthondhu feelingu anthanu gothaythu….
ya.. nachi.. i have tried such poems too
i wanted rhyming here as it has to be taken for song
!
@prashanth… thanks !
sakkat!!! one more para iddidre innu super aagirodu, or may be you left me wanting for more
when i read Vayaskara Padya, it thought it was just by chance, now with heart break. u have won a few hearts with ur writing skills. hope u go long way pening more such beauties..
Ninna ee kavithe namma manasannu ‘Chuchide’ Abhi…!!! Aadro chennagide…!!!
Superbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb anna
thanks all !!
Sunny, please read my other poems too
Nice one Abhi .. !!
ಮುಟ್ಟಿತು ಮನವ ಮುಟ್ಟಿತು….|
ಕೆರಳಿಸಿತು ಭವನೆಗಳ ಕೆರಳಿಸಿತು…||
thanks soumya and srinidhi
Good one!!!!
Good poem,, maga
suits my current situation……….
thanks
thats ok.. man.. dont worry
ya very true abhi you have said it nice
2nd stanza is nice kaNo.
ಚುಚ್ಚುತಿದೆ ಬಾಣಗಳು ನಿನ್ನ ಹೊರಸೆಳೆಯಲು
ಕಾರಣವು ನೀನೆಂದು ಇಬ್ಬರಿಗೂ ತಿಳಿದಿರಲು
ಕಣ್ಣ್ಕರಗಿ ಕಣ್ಣೀರೆ ಕೊನೆವರೆಗೂ ಕ್ರಮಿಸಲು
ಒಪ್ಪುವೆನು ಸಹಿಸುವೇನು ಎಲ್ಲವನು, ನಿನ್ನುಳಿಸಲು…
Nice one… continue…
thank you
Kankaragi kanneere Konevaregu Kramisalu—–
Ista aithu…something new……Good one……….as usual..
even first two lines are ……touchy lines
thanks a lot !
asusal super one…. once again…
beautiful one! …great poem once again
Where did you search these words…..:-)
eno feeling nice read , but tough to be in that position
neevu yavagalu bari tha erbeku
kannu ninna nodalu kaayuthalihudu, manasu rekke bicchi haaruthalihudu. Nee thorida aa preethi indu mullagi ee baala daarige nova needuthalihudu