There are some of my friends who have experienced a HEART-BREAK.. and still they would be doing everything they could do on earth to stop that from happenning.. ! Ofcourse. DEVDAS chapter would surely follow it , if they cant manage it well ! LOL !
This is dedicated to all those people who were/are in this situation ! Try to understand it!
ಹೃದಯವ ತೊರೆಯಲಾಗದು ನಿನಗೆಂದೂ
ಚುಚ್ಚಿಟ್ಟರು, ಇಲ್ಲ ಕಿಚ್ಚು ಹಚ್ಚಿಟ್ಟರು…!!!
ನಿನಗಿದೆ ನನ್ನ ಒಲುಮೆಯ ಬಂಧನ
ನಿನ್ನಲ್ಲಿ ಕಂಡಿರುವೆ ಒಪ್ಪಿಗೆಯ ಸ್ಪಂಧನ
ಬಸಿದಿರುವೆ ನನ್ನ ಶಾಂತಿಯ ಸಿಂಚನ
ನಿನಗೆಂದೇ ಇಟ್ಟಿರುವೆ ನನ್ನೆಲ್ಲಾ ಕಾಂಚನ
ಚುಚ್ಚುತಿದೆ ಬಾಣಗಳು ನಿನ್ನ ಹೊರಸೆಳೆಯಲು
ಕಾರಣವು ನೀನೆಂದು ಇಬ್ಬರಿಗೂ ತಿಳಿದಿರಲು
ಕಣ್ಣ್ಕರಗಿ ಕಣ್ಣೀರೆ ಕೊನೆವರೆಗೂ ಕ್ರಮಿಸಲು
ಒಪ್ಪುವೆನು ಸಹಿಸುವೇನು ಎಲ್ಲವನು, ನಿನ್ನುಳಿಸಲು
ಈ ಹೃದಯವ ತೊರೆಯಲಾಗದು ನಿನಗೆಂದೂ
ಚುಚ್ಚಿಟ್ಟರು, ಇಲ್ಲ ಕಿಚ್ಚು ಹಚ್ಚಿಟ್ಟರು…… !!
For those who experience font issues :
Heart Break
Please put your comments friends!! 
Dont break my heart 
!
March 14, 2009 at 6:56 pm |
Instant Poem
nice one again…
Chuchhittataru illi Kicchittataru
March 14, 2009 at 6:57 pm |
its Chucchittaru illi Kicchittaru
March 14, 2009 at 6:58 pm |
Thankfully, I was never in this situation
Ofcourse, I will never be 
March 14, 2009 at 6:59 pm |
Good Good !
thanks
March 14, 2009 at 7:01 pm |
Fire in da heart poem maga…. super dard bari poem….
March 14, 2009 at 7:05 pm |
Good one kano….but for whom is this??
March 14, 2009 at 7:06 pm |
thanks vinay !
March 14, 2009 at 7:20 pm |
kavi ratna kalidasa nannu meeristya kano
March 14, 2009 at 7:22 pm |
@ Pallavi.. not for you and me
!! hahahaha
@ badreesh.. thanks maga
March 14, 2009 at 9:29 pm |
nice one abhi… specially these words “ಚುಚ್ಚಿಟ್ಟರು, ಇಲ್ಲ ಕಿಚ್ಚು ಹಚ್ಚಿಟ್ಟರು”
March 14, 2009 at 9:43 pm |
thanks dude krishna
March 14, 2009 at 9:53 pm |
Hey Abhi,
Kavite chennagide..just a suggestion..don’t try hard to have similar sounding words at the end of sentences..it may help you write richer poems..sometimes this may restrict your true ability.just a suggestion though..
March 14, 2009 at 10:08 pm |
hai abi… nice poem brother… full of feelings….
thumba ishta aythu…..
yaake asthondhu feelingu anthanu gothaythu….
March 14, 2009 at 10:30 pm |
ya.. nachi.. i have tried such poems too
i wanted rhyming here as it has to be taken for song 
!
@prashanth… thanks !
March 14, 2009 at 10:36 pm |
sakkat!!! one more para iddidre innu super aagirodu, or may be you left me wanting for more
March 14, 2009 at 10:42 pm |
when i read Vayaskara Padya, it thought it was just by chance, now with heart break. u have won a few hearts with ur writing skills. hope u go long way pening more such beauties..
March 14, 2009 at 11:03 pm |
Ninna ee kavithe namma manasannu ‘Chuchide’ Abhi…!!! Aadro chennagide…!!!
March 15, 2009 at 12:20 am |
Superbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb anna
March 15, 2009 at 12:31 am |
thanks all !!
Sunny, please read my other poems too 
March 15, 2009 at 12:39 am |
Nice one Abhi .. !!
March 15, 2009 at 12:41 am |
ಮುಟ್ಟಿತು ಮನವ ಮುಟ್ಟಿತು….|
ಕೆರಳಿಸಿತು ಭವನೆಗಳ ಕೆರಳಿಸಿತು…||
March 15, 2009 at 9:08 am |
thanks soumya and srinidhi
March 15, 2009 at 9:48 am |
Good one!!!!
March 15, 2009 at 11:30 am |
Good poem,, maga
suits my current situation……….
March 15, 2009 at 12:57 pm |
thanks
thats ok.. man.. dont worry
March 15, 2009 at 12:58 pm |
ya very true abhi you have said it nice
March 15, 2009 at 1:20 pm |
2nd stanza is nice kaNo.
ಚುಚ್ಚುತಿದೆ ಬಾಣಗಳು ನಿನ್ನ ಹೊರಸೆಳೆಯಲು
ಕಾರಣವು ನೀನೆಂದು ಇಬ್ಬರಿಗೂ ತಿಳಿದಿರಲು
ಕಣ್ಣ್ಕರಗಿ ಕಣ್ಣೀರೆ ಕೊನೆವರೆಗೂ ಕ್ರಮಿಸಲು
ಒಪ್ಪುವೆನು ಸಹಿಸುವೇನು ಎಲ್ಲವನು, ನಿನ್ನುಳಿಸಲು…
Nice one… continue…
March 15, 2009 at 3:14 pm |
thank you
March 16, 2009 at 12:47 pm |
Kankaragi kanneere Konevaregu Kramisalu—–
Ista aithu…something new……Good one……….as usual..
even first two lines are ……touchy lines
March 16, 2009 at 3:31 pm |
thanks a lot !
March 18, 2009 at 2:50 pm |
asusal super one…. once again…
March 19, 2009 at 8:20 pm |
beautiful one! …great poem once again
August 21, 2009 at 3:26 pm |
Where did you search these words…..:-)
eno feeling nice read , but tough to be in that position
neevu yavagalu bari tha erbeku