ನಡೆಯದ೦ತಾಗಿದೆ…. ಶೂನ್ಯ ತಿರಗದ೦ತಾಗಿದೆ
ಓಡುವ ಕುದುರೆಯ ಕಟ್ಟಿಹಾಕಿದಂತೆ
ಮುಗಿಲೇರುವ ಆವಿಯ ನೆಲಕುರುಳಿಸಿದಂತೆ
ಹರಿಯುವ ನದಿಯ ತಡೆ ಹಿಡಿದಂತೆ
ನಡೆಯದ೦ತಾಗಿದೆ ನನಗೆ ನಡೆಯದ೦ತಾಗಿದೆ
ಮುರಿದಿರುವುದು ಬರಿ ಒಂದು ಬೆರಳು
ಆದರೆ ಸಹಿಸುತ್ತಿದೆ ದೇಹವೆಲ್ಲಾ ಅಳಲು
ಕ್ಷಣಕಾಲ ನಿಲ್ಲದವನ ತನುವು
ಮರಯಬೇಕಿಂದು ಕಾರ್ಯಗಳು ಹಲವು !
ಹಿತಾಸಕ್ತರೆ೦ದರು ಪಡೆಯಲೇಬೇಕು ಆರಾಮ
ಆದರು೦ಟೆ ಜೀವನಕ್ಕೆಲ್ಲಿಯಾದರು ವಿರಾಮ?
ಹವ್ಯಾಸವೇ ಉಸಿರೋಳಗೊಂದು ಖಾತೆ
ಬೆರಳಿಗೀಯುವ ಶಾಂತಿಯ ಉಸಿರಿಗೀಯಲಾದೀತೇ?
For people who cant read kan fonts, here is the image,

Toe Padya
Enjoy.. pls comment
December 11, 2008 at 10:19 am |
very nice poem maga , ee kavana nodidre neenestu novu anubavista idya anta gottagutte , bega ninge vaasi agli abhi,
December 11, 2008 at 10:41 am |
Kavithe tumba channagide, its too gud..but i can understand your pain, get well soon……!
December 11, 2008 at 10:45 am |
Nim toe tumba Punya maaDide-to get so much care and attention…
December 11, 2008 at 10:45 am |
nice beginning…the song could have had a larger meaning if u had not got into the specific problem of ur toe being fractured…the first paragraph is so universal…but then the 2nd and 3rd kills it!
December 11, 2008 at 10:53 am |
@ raghu, usually I like writing in a style that comes down the hierarchy.. from the universal to specific.. and then end it with the bottom line of the feeling!
lol ! hahaha
i just followed the same here!
I like to kill universality fast.. and jump my specific thing fast in the poem!
c’mon its a situational song of PAINING TOE
December 11, 2008 at 11:05 am |
@ all , thanks for ur comments!
December 11, 2008 at 11:07 am |
hee hee hee, i can’t do anything other than smiling…
very nice peom…
wonderful one. I laughed when i read ur peom, but I know how much pain u r experiencing…
U will get well soon … Keep smiling
December 11, 2008 at 11:09 am |
Shit. .what a comment? Whats there to laugh.?.. I thought you would feeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeel the last para
!
December 11, 2008 at 11:25 am |
ಹೀಗಾಯಿತೆಂದು ತಿಳಿದು ಬಂದೆ
ನಾ ನಿನ್ನ ನೋಡಲೆಂದು ಅಂದು
ನೋಡಿ ನಿನ್ನಯ ಸ್ಥಿತಿಯನು
ಯೋಚನೆಯಲ್ಲಿ ಮುಳುಗಿದೆನೆಂದು…
ಹೇಗಿರುವನು ಇವನು ತಿರುಗಾಡದೇ
ಮಾಡುವನೇನು ಇವನು ತಿರುಗಾಡದೇ
ಪಾದರಸದಂತೆ ತಿರುಗಾಡಿದವನು
ಕೂತಿರುವನಲ್ಲಾ ಒಂದೆಡೆ
ಹೇಗಿರುವನು ಹೀಗೆ ಮೂರು ವಾರ
ಹೇಗಿರುವನು ಹೀಗೆ ಮೂರು ವಾರ!!
December 11, 2008 at 12:15 pm |
Get well soon abhi…and like all ur poems i loved this too but im feeling bad that ur in pain ashte!!!!!!
December 11, 2008 at 1:10 pm |
great u have a great talent too.i never knew that you can write poems too,
let me know ur intrests first,keep going.get well soon.
December 11, 2008 at 1:45 pm |
Hee HEe.. what did you think I was man pavan !
@ pallavi.. dont worry.. am not suffering from pain now.. due to PAIN KILLER tablets
December 11, 2008 at 2:55 pm |
ಅರಿಯದೆ ಆದ ನೋವಿಗೆ ಮರುಗುತಿರುವೆ ನೀ ಏಕೆ ???
ಉಳಿಸಿದ ಜೀವಕೆ ನಗೆಯ ಬಿಂದುವಾಗಿರುವೆ ನೀ ಇಂದು ….ಸದಾ ಎಂದು…
ಕಾಲದ ಪರಿಯಲ್ಲೇ ಮಾಸುವುದು ಗಾಯ …. ಉಳಿಯುವುದು ನಿನಗೆ ಸದಾ ಅದರ ಛಾಯ
ಬಿಡುವಿರದ ದೇಹಕೆ ವಿಶ್ರಾಂತಿ ಇಂದು …. ನಲಿಯುವ ಮನಸಿಗೆ ಬೇಲಿ ಎಂದೂ
ಸಹಿಸಲಾರದ ನೋವು ನಿನಗೆ ಇಂದು …. ಮರೆಯಲಾರದ ನೆನಪು ನಿನಗೆ ಎಂದೂ
maneli free agi haapy agiru!!! dont strain urslef…. take care
December 11, 2008 at 7:51 pm |
Enaytu Abhi ? How did u fracture ur toe ? Kavite tumba chennagide …
December 12, 2008 at 2:13 am |
WOODEN DOOR nan TOE mele bittu kano..
thanks kiran and deepthi… Deepthi, nin poem fantastic.. aadre ashTondella PAINing scene illa kaNE
December 12, 2008 at 4:19 am |
Hey..!! your toe is really lucky to get the kind of attention. And not to worry about your “Havyasa” when there is omnipresent Internet.
December 12, 2008 at 4:36 am |
Nice poem dude……… get well soon….
December 12, 2008 at 4:36 am |
Yes Srinidhi
very true
December 12, 2008 at 4:47 am |
lo abhi,
rest togo ..
ivaththu ninn poem chennaagide anthini .. but next week alli ..
ninn kaalu chennagide antha helothara maadko
December 12, 2008 at 4:52 am |
thanks adon
and vatsa.. sure kaNO ! thankyou
December 12, 2008 at 7:02 am |
nice one maga
comments are too good!
December 12, 2008 at 5:18 pm |
Ninna alalannu padya roopake aste preethi inda surisedheya.
”
Onde mathalli heluvudadre
“Macha super agide
December 12, 2008 at 5:20 pm |
Thanks kaNe champu !
December 16, 2008 at 5:16 pm |
Abhi, tumba chennagide……….get well soon
December 18, 2008 at 1:10 pm |
maga aa novallu intha adbuta kavithe bardiddiyalla great.
ene adaru harshada koolige varshada koolu kaledhu kolla baradhu allawa so be careful and take as much as rest possible
December 19, 2008 at 9:00 pm |
abbbba tumba sakkatgide
December 20, 2008 at 9:17 am |
Thank you ! Arvind, Nagi and Vidya !
January 6, 2009 at 11:16 am |
ha ha ha thats nice
January 6, 2009 at 11:19 am |
spb ge kaalu fracture adaaga ee paada punya paada hadina rec ittante.. murida kaalinondige kootu bhavapoorna vagi haadodakke sadhyavaitu antare avaru… nimage kavya rachane maduva spoorti …. ha ha… ottinalli noovu kuda kalege spoorti endaitu bidi!
January 6, 2009 at 12:05 pm |
Oh thats a good news about SPB